Minute
Catastrophe
Spanner
Union
Strategy
Film
In less than a minute
What was going so well can collapse into catastrophe
As easily as a spanner
Can undo the union
Between nut and bolt. But there must be a strategy
Out there to save this film.
So far, all they've got on film
Is a fifty-two minute
Montage of scenes. There's no strategy
Or plot. It's already a catastrophe
And they haven't even approached the union.
That's bound to throw a monkey wrench (spanner
For you UK types) into the works. But maybe a spanner
Is just what this film
Needs. Something to forge a union
Out of the ninety minute
Catastrophe
They've got now. Perhaps that's their strategy.
An accidental strategy
Certainly, but no less likely to work than the right-sized spanner
Can avert a catastrophe.
It could convert this film
From a minute
Footnote into a powerful union
Of acting and directing talent. A union
Based on a strategy
Meant to make each minute
Reach the next, like a spanner
Fuses two parts, making the film
A masterpiece, rather than a catastrophe.
"Citizen Kane" was originally judged a catastrophe,
And so it may be here. The union
Of these seemingly unrelated bits of film
Can give birth to a strategy.
We need something to act as a bridge, or spanner.
It'll take only a minute.
Just as out of catastrophe a strategy
Can emerge, so can a union of these scenes be bridged by a spanner
And a marketable film created in under a minute.
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